I wrote this when I was engaged. My attempt at poetry,so if you wish to Laught out Loud..please do so.
"All my troubles are gone,
With you on my side.
In my heart,in my soul,
You shall always reside.
Every breathe I take,
Every time my heart beats.
I want you more than ever,
For you, my heart bleeds.
With every step I take,
With very blink of my eyelid,
I thank the moment I met you,
For look what it did.
I can't sleep at nights,
I don't feel hungey at all.
What have you done to me?
Without you,my Life in at a stall.
The wine of desire,
Starts flowing through my veins.
With every thought of you,
All my stress goes to the drains.
Love is in the air,
And it is here to stay.
For as long as you previal in my mind,
Evils thoughts will be at bay."
A very good attempt!
ReplyDeleteAm sure the person for whom this was written would have been very happy..
IMHO, heart bleeds was a bit negative in the context of the poem..
Otherwise.. Good job!
@Spicy Sweet:- Thanx for the comments.
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